Carpathia - Electronic/Industrial

[carpathia]

I don't mean to spam, I used to be on the old board, username - deepdeepdeepdeep. I am looking for a bit of exposure and feedback, I am in the learning process with Ableton at the moment.

If you have the time, listen to the first two songs, TDATH and 11. I will appreciate any feedback, and thanks in advance!

[carpathia]

Maybe it would help if I included a link, ha.


http://soundcloud.com/carpathia

[carpathia]

New song! Check it out please!

http://soundcloud.com/carpathia/omm-0910-demo

[zoomoon]

OMM-0910: It's pretty harsh, which is good, but I think the track as a whole could use some space. The outro is great; what if there was a breakdown in the middle featuring that?

[danebraddy]

yeah that track is great, not sure if you are into comparisons, but it has the vibe of a tweaker track - but a lot darker... cool stuff.

[carpathia]

Thanks a lot! I appreciate the feedback. I do need to work on my mixing and song structure. and good Idea zoomon, I will give the breakdown a try when I rearrange the song and mix again.

[carpathia]

New demo uploaded here: http://soundcloud.com/carpathia/luh-demo

Check it out if you have the time, and any feedback would be appreciated!


Thanks,
James