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carpathia
05-30-2012, 03:05 AM
I don't mean to spam, I used to be on the old board, username - deepdeepdeepdeep. I am looking for a bit of exposure and feedback, I am in the learning process with Ableton at the moment.

If you have the time, listen to the first two songs, TDATH and 11. I will appreciate any feedback, and thanks in advance!

carpathia
05-30-2012, 04:12 AM
Maybe it would help if I included a link, ha.


http://soundcloud.com/carpathia

carpathia
06-14-2012, 03:23 AM
New song! Check it out please!

http://soundcloud.com/carpathia/omm-0910-demo

zoomoon
06-14-2012, 08:17 AM
OMM-0910: It's pretty harsh, which is good, but I think the track as a whole could use some space. The outro is great; what if there was a breakdown in the middle featuring that?

danebraddy
06-14-2012, 08:44 AM
yeah that track is great, not sure if you are into comparisons, but it has the vibe of a tweaker track - but a lot darker... cool stuff.

carpathia
06-14-2012, 01:42 PM
Thanks a lot! I appreciate the feedback. I do need to work on my mixing and song structure. and good Idea zoomon, I will give the breakdown a try when I rearrange the song and mix again.

carpathia
07-03-2012, 07:05 PM
New demo uploaded here: http://soundcloud.com/carpathia/luh-demo

Check it out if you have the time, and any feedback would be appreciated!


Thanks,
James