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robot32
12-11-2012, 12:36 AM
Hey everyone,

This is my first time posting here, and I'm really nervous so I might pee a little bit... Anyways, it really surprised me to see how active a “3rd-party” forum community can be when I arrived here [I love 3rd party sites! no, really!]. Immediately I thought of this as a great opportunity to express myself, and begin my slow and destructive process to take over the world.

When I heard the new single, ‘Keep It Together,’ from the new HTDA EP, it slightly blew my fuckin mind, and an idea sparked. They released the studio-oriented music video for Keep It Together, and I saw an opportunity to apply my own narrative to that song. This idea would end up going through a pout of identities in what it was trying to describe itself as, and it seems that frustration of trying to put this together reflects itself through the narrative [but somehow it remained tasteful in that whole process… or whatever].

Skipping past a bunch of shit that isn’t important or relevant, I began to adopt the new analog glitch art direction for HTDA, and incorporate that visual narrative element into a non-linear, visual adventure of sorts… for a new video of ‘Keep It Together’. I had saved up some cash, spent a lot of it on camera equipment, grabbed a couple people who made themselves available to help me out, and went about putting this into production over the next 7 weeks. By the way, I love to hear your feedback, and if you like it, share it with everyone :)


This is the first place I'm sharing it publicly, so it's like... a welcoming present for all of you. :)

edit: If you want to help me out, upvote the *reddit thread* (http://www.reddit.com/r/videos/comments/14pkwc/i_cant_believe_this_is_a_fan_video_how_to_destroy/) if you like this! If it gets enough traction in the nin subreddit, then we'll see about putting it in a more public subreddit

[hd is awesome, and so is fullscreen, watch on youtube for best experience]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iEVslJJnXc8


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JamesCmuse
12-11-2012, 04:59 AM
That is the best fan video I've ever seen. Well fucking done!!

robot32
12-11-2012, 05:16 AM
That is the best fan video I've ever seen. Well fucking done!!

Thank you! You're the best video I've ever... oh wait.. erm Thanks! :)

ImTheWiseJanitor
12-11-2012, 05:34 AM
Whoa! That was REALLY well done. Kudos, now your video is gonna be stuck in my head every time I hear the song, haha. I especially loved that brief pan shot of the hotel room window toward the end. Gave me chills. Is this downloadable? I might wanna keep a copy handy for inspiration/reference on a future project or something.

Also, I'm sure that if Rob saw this, his glitch art boner would be outta control - in a good way! :P

Vertigo
12-11-2012, 05:40 AM
Holy shit that is incredible. Perfectly encapsulates the spirit of the song and the EP's art style, and works well with the rhythm. It almost seems like it's denegrating it to call it a fan video, as it works better than most professional videos in my opinion, but it makes the achievement all the more impressive.

Actually, it makes the song come alive for me in a way it hasn't done previously, which is what the very best music videos sometimes manage to do.

robot32
12-11-2012, 05:45 AM
@Alrea (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=427) - Glitch art boner... that's giving me ideas hmmm.. oh and thank you very much, and share it everywhere! You can do keeptube for downloading vids straight off youtube, or maybe I'll make a public dropbox link for anyone who wants a pre-youtube compressed movie file. Ideas ideas

@Vertigo (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=628) - YOU are incredible! Seriously though, that hit me right in the feels, big-ass smile right on my silly face. Money can't buy that kind of joy <3!

ImTheWiseJanitor
12-11-2012, 05:58 AM
@Alrea (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=427) - Glitch art boner... that's giving me ideas hmmm.. oh and thank you very much, and share it everywhere! You can do keeptube for downloading vids straight off youtube, or maybe I'll make a public dropbox link for anyone who wants a pre-youtube compressed movie file. Ideas ideas

Spoken like a true Reznor fan, eh? ;P I'll have to get it stashed on a drive soon. This video actually got some creative juices flowing for me, it resonated on such a good level. Now all I need is a camera and a working computer (Come ooon, returned rent check!).

That thumbnail alone is just so...foreboding. It really gives viewers a good indication of what's in store.

BenAkenobi
12-11-2012, 05:59 AM
M-must... resist... remembering... nine inch nails... deep video...

robot32
12-11-2012, 06:04 AM
@Alrea Such.. positive.. comments.. staahhpp! My face hurts! <3
@BenAkenobi (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=122) Lol cool, I broke someone

JamesCmuse
12-11-2012, 06:27 AM
You should send this to Rob Sheridan and see what he thinks, he seems to be in love with glitch art and it might even catch Trent's eye :)

robot32
12-11-2012, 06:33 AM
You should send this to Rob Sheridan and see what he thinks, he seems to be in love with glitch art and it might even catch Trent's eye :)

That has been part of the evil plan since the beginning ;) I had a bit of bad timing with releasing this, he's on his honeymoon so that would be difficult right now... but who knows? Maybe we'll just need to be really vocal about this :confused:

Warped_Savant
12-11-2012, 07:41 AM
For a fan made video, that is simply amazing. You've done very well. I'd love to get my hands on a non-youtube compressed version of it...

robot32
12-11-2012, 07:45 AM
For a fan made video, that is simply amazing. You've done very well. I'd love to get my hands on a non-youtube compressed version of it...

Thanks! I just drank some really shit milk but I'll pm you the Download link after this vomit feeling goes away :C

eversonpoe
12-11-2012, 08:59 AM
that was...holy fucking shit. i feel like i just watched the most well-produced paranormal snuff film ever.

if you don't mind me asking...what did you use for the black ooze? it was extremely effectively creepy.

i really hope the official NIN camp takes notice of this video, because it's amazing.

also, you have a great sense of humor, and that makes me like you even more.

danebraddy
12-11-2012, 09:07 AM
This. was. awesome. The thumbnail icon looks like Trent did in The Space in Between video - the motel reminded me of that video as well.

The quality of it though... fucking unreal.

Sometimes you doubt that indie filmmakers can compete with big budget, big "talent" works, and then something like this comes along - awesome to the Nth degree!

MAD
12-11-2012, 09:07 AM
THOSE DRIPS IN REVERSE. I love the video. It's the small things that really makes it awesome.
Yes, glitch art, very awesome.. but double take on the moment when the black liquid falls upwards. Those small things that you think nobody will notice.

Good job, I am really impressed.

hobochic
12-11-2012, 12:57 PM
I was this close to say the video was better than the song. (I just pressed play without reading anything and thought it was the official video) Good job!

profane
12-11-2012, 02:01 PM
This is wildly creative. Totally love this. And just about anything everyone else has said for that matter. Awesome!
I would also like a non compressed version if that's possible.

robot32
12-11-2012, 05:58 PM
@eversonpoe (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=588) I like you even more for replying with such fffffuuuuuuuccc..... thanks! :]
@danebraddy (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=349) The quality of your reply is fucking UNREAL, thank you! :]
@MAD (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=136) THOSE THANKS IN REVERSE, FUCK YEY!
@hobochic (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=888) Dawwwwwww :3
@profane (http://www.echoingthesound.org/community/member.php?u=281) Your comment is wildly totally the best, thank you!

edit: formatting

ItsJustDave
12-11-2012, 07:54 PM
Brilliant work! To the point that I wonder if this is some sort of commissioned viral marketing.

robot32
12-11-2012, 08:21 PM
Brilliant work! To the point that I wonder if this is some sort of commissioned viral marketing.

Thanks very much! I'm trying to find a good way to promote it, so if any of you know any famous twitter peeps, I will make you a custom glitch portrait of you ;D

Also, I'll try to do a reddit submission in a bigger channel, the front page is a crazy dream - but I like crazy. Of course I'd need ETS' help in spreading the word :>

Shnoorum
12-11-2012, 10:08 PM
Wow, amazing quality. I've never seen a fan video of anything looking so polished before. I adored the quick scenery shots that flashed up in particular. Was that a toilet she stuck her head into by the way? If so, I bloody well hope you gave her a thank you card! She got right in there. Jesus, what a trooper.

robot32
12-11-2012, 10:17 PM
Wow, amazing quality. I've never seen a fan video of anything looking so polished before. I adored the quick scenery shots that flashed up in particular. Was that a toilet she stuck her head into by the way? If so, I bloody well hope you gave her a thank you card! She got right in there. Jesus, what a trooper.

Haha actually she didn't stick her head in the toilet, the male character did that. It tasted funny, I almost threw up and it was a good day.

Thanks for the comment :]

BRoswell
12-11-2012, 10:28 PM
Pretty good video. I think my only complaint is having the characters lip-sync to the song. I always prefer to let the singer or singers narrate the video if they don't actually appear in it.

Shnoorum
12-11-2012, 10:30 PM
Haha actually she didn't stick her head in the toilet, the male character did that. It tasted funny, I almost threw up and it was a good day.

Thanks for the comment :]

Oops, my bad. Sorry, I'm going blind. Thats clearly a very manly ear. Good dedication right there. Doubt theres much in the world I'd feel passionate enough to stick my face into a toilet over.

Anyways, not much I can really add that everyone hasn't already said. Awesome job man

robot32
12-11-2012, 10:45 PM
BRoswell That's fair enough, everyone has their own tastes, much thanks for the input :>
Shnoorum Haha :P Thanks!

bobbie solo
12-11-2012, 11:40 PM
woah. impressive as said above.

robot32
12-11-2012, 11:43 PM
There's a promising reddit that has spawned recently, help give me some love by upvoting and sharing this everywhere!


We made the front page of r/videos!! keep chugging wooohoo!

http://www.reddit.com/r/videos/comments/14pkwc/i_cant_believe_this_is_a_fan_video_how_to_destroy/

my voice just
12-12-2012, 01:36 AM
Why It`s Not Blowing My Mind

though visual glitch and analog effects are maybe even better, than in ice age - they`re too repetetive and overused on my taste

you acting too much like [dirty] trent [from "deep"] is a little cheesy, i presume

that ooze reminds me of the dye from deep as well

oh... and smashing tvs with a bat is corny

http://i078.radikal.ru/1212/7e/95db33ab08b7.jpghttp://s020.radikal.ru/i701/1212/d0/4b94889cd5fc.jpg

all in all - it`s a nice try

p.s.: you can call me cunt/dick now

robot32
12-12-2012, 02:14 AM
Dude, this is crazy.. I didn't even ... Haha, alright well you can either take my word for it or call out my claim here as bullshit, but I wasn't even considering that scene when I was setting up this shot. I was thinking the toilet bowl shots might have more resemblance, but you putting those images side by side made my jaw drop a bit. Nonetheless, I won't be a baby bitch about someone else's perspective contrasting with my own. I appreciate the feedback, I feel several things could have been done differently/better, but at some point I was forced to make myself wrap it up because of x y z reasons.

edit:: Forgot to mention your note about "Deep." I wont deny a strong inspiration coming from there, but yeah, tonalities and context etc... in short - good point!

Thanks again for the honesty, cheers :)

my voice just
12-12-2012, 02:31 AM
well, i believe you, but our subconsciousness is a bitch
i noticed copying something i liked in some way or another many times by myself
i`m not sure it`s a bad thing

and glad you appreciate my little criticism

robot32
12-12-2012, 07:56 AM
For anyone who's interested, not like it REALLY matters, and I have no issue with youtube... but VIMEO LINK! (https://vimeo.com/55409830)

Reaps
12-12-2012, 11:38 AM
Thanks for the vimeo link, and of course for making a damn fine video. Cheers.

Deadpool
01-08-2013, 07:10 AM
Somehow, I overlooked this music video until today. Great job, sir! I enjoyed the hell out of it.

My only complaints, which are really nitpicks, are that the glitch effect might be slightly overused, and the female actress outdoes the male one :D ! She's surprisingly fantastic. The especially impressive thing is that you used her even though you probably always planned to post the finished product to forums like this -- where fans would recognize the lack of Mariqueen doing her own lip sync immediately.

Point being, you cast someone good enough to really make the case for hiring actors to replace the actual recording artist for professional music videos. The only other good example I can think of this is in the video for Royksopp's "What Else Is There?" and even that actress/model isn't as compelling as yours. However, I love that in that video, the actual singer still makes an appearance. If I were How to destroy angels_, I would ask you to film some new shots of the band in the same locations (or use the LA equivalents) and make a new edit of the video with band members now inserted into the existing narrative... with or without them lip syncing, but definitely keeping the original actress as the star.

Trains
01-08-2013, 07:53 AM
Wow, what a video! That was extremely well put together, major amounts of respect and kudos to you and everyone involved in making it. That genuinely made me feel more excited about that particular song than anything else has managed to do so. I'm actually a little speechless, I suddenly feel like I 'get' this song now, where before I wasn't too sure about it. About three quarters of the way through I realized what I like so much about your video: you've made HTDA feel edgy, eerie and perhaps even a little bit dangerous, where before they felt a little too 'safe' for me. Bravo!

katara
01-10-2013, 05:57 AM
This is way better than the official video. My only complaint is that it's not the official one.

konstantin
01-10-2013, 07:40 AM
as far as narrative goes, this video would have been so much better if the tv was a printer. SMASHING PRINTERS IS NEVER CORNY! they're the evil!

i don't really know what it takes to make a video like this one, other than cash, but you seem pretty talented to me. a lot of good stuff (and some that made me cringe, but that's not really important).

my voice just
01-10-2013, 04:56 PM
the glitch effect might be slightly overused
http://vimeo.com/56805766
really?

Deadpool
01-10-2013, 05:13 PM
http://vimeo.com/56805766
really?


Hahahaha!

I haven't yet lurked in the thread for the new video, but I'd imagine that's a common complaint. There's some visual fatigue no doubt, but it's still gratifying to see that effect in motion. My favorite part is seeing Atticus sing along - he kinda got the shaft in the incredible 'Ice age' video.

Overall, I favor this 'Keep it together' fan film over the official 'Loop closes' clip, but that might change. Currently, 'Ice Age' is my favorite Destroy Angels visual aid. I like it even more than 'The Space in Between' video. 'Ice age' didn't click for me until I watched it a second time on an big screen HD TV.

I hope the amazing output from both fans and band alike continues!

robot32
01-16-2013, 11:24 AM
It's been a while since I've checked back here, and the new surge of comments are all too-fucking awesome! If Rob Sheridan ever considered he idea of looking to hire an assisstant, or an intern... or a slave.. I'd sign up without hesitation. [editted this out]

I'm cooking out a new thing as I type this - for anyone interested in the making/production process of this project. Will update with a link when it's ready ;]

edit:: Here's the embed, enjoy! [Note, youtube forces ads for these kinds of videos, so apologies in-advance for popup ads]


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_OzagvFbAU

nin5in
08-27-2013, 12:10 AM
BRAVO!!!! This is so professional looking. Very well done!

OSLIN
08-30-2013, 09:39 AM
I don't know how I missed this. Fricking fantastic!